Social 10-1
Position Paper
By: Morgan Van
Dusen
What did screenwriter, film director and
editor, James Cameron, have in mind when coming up with the
action filled plot line for the award winning movie “Avatar”? Did he simply
have entertainment in mind, or was there something more? Comparing the major
events in Avatar to our past, most specifically the colonization of North
America, you will find there are numerous similarities between the two.
Similarities such as the burden the humans felt in the movie, as they believed
that it was their right to take over the Na’vi’s Hometree, and to marginalize
them and to take away what was below the Hometree. This was much like how the
Europeans felt that their culture was superior to the First Nations, and that
it was the Europeans duty to civilize the ‘savages’, as the Europeans had a
very ethnocentric attitude. Avatar and our past have connections through many
parts of our past such as marginalization, ethnocentrism, but beginning
with globalization.
A type of globalization occurred in both the interaction of the Na’vi
and the humans, or Sky People, who contacted the Na’vi though Avatars, and the
interaction of the Europeans and the First Nations in North America. The humans
had discovered Pandora,
a planet in the star systems that were populated by the Na'vi, and through cultural contact, the Sky People
decided that they were an unfit society, and not up to the standards that the
Sky People’s society was at. In the minds of the Sky People, the Na’vi’s were
savages and needed to learn new and more proper ways or living. “Look,
Sully, I want you to learn this savages from the inside, I want you to gain
their trust. I need to know how to force their cooperation or hammer them hard
if they won't.” said Colonel Miles Quartich, who was
willing to destroy anything in his path to push aside the Na’vi and get to the unobtanium. The exact
same event occurred with the Europeans. The Europeans had left their continent to escape religious
persecution and discovered North America. The Europeans discovered indigent peoples, and decided that they
needed to civilize them, so they laid out the land how they wanted it, similar
to how Europe was before. They mapped the land they discovered, and gave new
names to all of their discoveries. They began to colonize. The Europeans first
started colonizing North America in the 16th and 17th centuries; they
integrated themselves into society forcefully, changing everything as they
pleased. They felt it was their duty and their right to change the First
Nations into something they were not.
Since the Sky People felt it was
their right to take away the home of the Na’vi to destroy the Hometree,
civilize them, and to take the precious unobtanium, it became very stressful and almost a
burden. This played right into the term ‘White Man’s Burden.’ The Europeans
also felt a very strong responsibility and felt that it was their obligation to
take over the land that the First Nations had clearly been occupying. Both
societies, the Sky People and Europeans, had a very strong attitude that both of
their ethnicity was the best, so both had a very ethnocentric outlook over the
Na’vi and First Nations. The Sky People had no empathy whatsoever if they tore
apart families in the demolition of the Na’vi’s Hometree just to retrieve the
mineral, unobtanium. The Europeans as well had no interest in preserving the
First Nations culture, since the Europeans felt their culture wasn’t
politically correct anyways, the Europeans decided to assimilated the First
Nations. They pushed them aside, ignored them completely, and marginalized
every First Nations person.
With the Sky People and Europeans taking no notice of the Na’vi or
First Nations presence or ownership of the land, the Sky People and Europeans
simply either marginalized them, or if that was not possible because the Na’vi
and First Nations would rebel, they would assimilate them. The Sky People had
no sympathy what so ever towards the Na’vi, they did not care if they totally
demolished all of what the Na’vi had that made up their cultural identity, as long
as they got the unobtanium. But to the Europeans, land was
wealth. If you had tons of land, you were royalty. If you did not, you were a
peasant. And the First Nations had a lot of land that the Europeans felt was
not being used properly, so they took it upon themselves to depopulate the
First Nations, and to integrate the First Nations into the European culture and
way of life. This was an attempt to completely strip them of their identity,
and turn the First Nations into something they were not, and did not want to
be. The Europeans could have accepted the First Nations culture and through
acculturation and accommodation, lived peacefully together on the same land and
possibly intermixed and to combine each other’s culture to create a hybridized
society. The Sky People could have done the same thing and made peace with the
Na’vi and possibly make a deal with the Na’vi to share the mineral. But both
the Sky People and Europeans decided to use their advanced technology to take
over the Na’vi and First Nations. Destroying the Na’vi and First Nations home
land and Hometree, and using it for worse purposes.
With
the comparison of the
plot line of the movie Avatar, to our past colonization in North America, the
similarities are quite noticeable. Both the Sky People and Europeans simply
marginalized the Na’vi and First Nations because they though it was their right
and duty, and because they thought their culture was better, and assimilated
the ‘savages’ to take over the land and use it for their purposes. They events
that occurred during the colonization of North America are reflected in the
movie Avatar. Still today there are disagreements on the rights that our First
Nations receive and if some of our actions infringe on their territory, and
that all stems back to the Europeans ethnocentric attitudes and actions. We’re
all human. We all make mistakes. But treating people the way you want to be
treated could have definitely been a good lesson to have taught the Europeans.
I love your introduction!! It connects the social grammer and melds the topics wonderfully!! Its a wonderful intro and your essay is going to be just as good! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Erin!! I read over your introduction and it is amazing! Great job, I can tell your paragraphs will flow perfectly together!
ReplyDeleteYou have a few grammatical and structural errors in your introduction. In your introduction you mention "the burden the white men felt", but i would change this from white men to humans. I know that you are alluding to "The White Man's Burden" but the movie includes more than just white people as the imperialists (which in a way make it uncomfortably ironic). The pronoun is a problem in that sentence because it refers back to the subject which is the white men but you have it written as referring to the Na'vi. Please add "This was" before your sentence that starts with "Much like".
ReplyDeleteYour thesis statement is too lengthy and ambitious. Unless you are planning on writing a ten to twenty page paper you will need to refine this. I suggest lumping the topics together. I suggest laying out your thesis like this: "Avatar and our past has connections through many parts of our past such as marginalization, and ethnocentrism, but beginning with globalization."
I would change "Historical globalization" as your topic in body paragraph one to "A type of globalization". Remember that the film Avatar is set in the future, not in history. Oh and I think you were looking for the vocabulary term "integrated".
In body paragraph two I believe you meant to say "ethnicity" rather than "ethics". Ethics has to do with morals while ethnicity has to do with cultural and racial background. You also used the word "apathy" where I think you meant "empathy". Apathy has to do with not caring - so in this case I think they were very apathetic.
In body paragraph two you use the word apathy again. You also have a sentence fragment in the sentence: "To completely strip them..." You will need to add "This was an attempt..." in order to give that sentence a subject. When you refer to "..a mixed offspring" this is a great opportunity to instead use class vocabulary. You should try either hybridization or homogenization, depending on what you are going for.
Your conclusion looks pretty good. I have a suggestion for the sentence"...and because their culture was better, and assimilated the ‘savages’ to take over the land and use for their purposes." I think that this would sound clearer to what I think you mean if it was altered to be "..because they thought their..." and "...use it for...". These are the sorts of things I was hoping that your peers would have helped you find during peer editing. I am not sure about this sentence: "The social, political, environmental, and economical events that occurred throughout both Avatar and the colonization of North America all contribute to globalization, and the colonization of North America shaped the way our lives our now." I suppose you do discuss these topics in the essay, though quite minimally. Unless you expound on them I am not sure if this is essential. Perhaps you need to discuss more in your globalization paragraph the issues of economics, politics, environment, and social. You can even add a second paragraph about globalization if you wish. The other issue I have is that it sounds like you are saying that the events that occur in Avatar shaped our past. I know that this is not what you mean but you have included it with the events from history. You also used the word "defiantly" when I think you meant "definitely." that definitely changes things.
Overall I think that this is a pretty good essay. There are some other minimal grammatical errors that you may want to clean up but it is pretty good.I think that at this stage it is a competent essay. However I think if work on it a little more it could be an exemplary essay.