Avatar Essay final
draft Jake Williams
The oppression of any peoples from
any time or place is wrong and we should all know it! In this essay I will be
exploring the different aspects that relate to our past and in the movie
Avatar, as in the oppression of native peoples, ethnocentrism, colonialism
cultural contact and marginalization. There is a very close relation between
this movie and how our pasts played out, the humans in this movie travel to the
planet Pandora and try to mine all of the unobtainium from this planets core because
they believe their race is more important and they need it more.
The humans in this movie felt that
the needs of their planet and existence outweighed the needs of the Na’vi
peoples; this turned out as a terribly bad way to think for humans in this
movie and usually does the same in our lives, for in this movie and most times
in life thinning that you or your ethnic background is better than others will
not turn out well for you like for example the Nazis, They believed that there
so called Aryan race was superior to all others and tried to eliminate all inferior
races, this as we all know did not turn out well for them and never will. Specifically
in this movie the humans believe that their need for unobtainium outweighed the
Na’vi’s need for life and religion this in common terms is ethnocentrism, like
when the Europeans first travelled to America and tried to control all the land
and felt that there need for space was more important than the First nations
way of life and religion
The Humans set of colonies on Pandora with what seems like no care for
the areas surrounding them and thought for the cultures they would be affecting
which made the first contact between these two cultures to most likely be an
unpleasant one starting of a harsh relationship. The contact between the Na’vi
and the Humans was from what you see in the movie Avatar a very flawed and
harsh reality. The humans only cared about themselves and the resources of the
planet Pandora, not caring for the race of humanoids the Navi or there way of
life, their religion or there people just what they had to gain from. Pandora.
This relates greatly to how Europeans took advantage of the First Nations of
America and used them in their circle of mercantilism, they bought the furs of
beavers and other animals and shipped them back to Europe for a small cost,
when in Europe the furs get turned into a product as in Hats or fur coats and
sent back to America to be sold at a high rate of profit. This leads to the
downfall and poor quality of life for the initial workers how killed the beaver
and forces them into a state of poverty, that in a way is a form of
marginalization
The simplest way of identifying marginalization in this movie in the
physical sense, the Humans had a home base set up on Pandora from which you can
see is huge and takes up a lot of the land. They are forcing the Na’vi away
from the area and therefore forcing them away from the humane society, in a
more sophisticated level the humans are taking away the religion and the way of
life the Na’vi have always had and making there society more harsh and
undesirable marginalizing them in a way and they forced the Na’vi into schools
and tried to make them part of their society but they always but their own race
first, the humans always put their race first and there needs before the needs of the Na’vi, just like how once again I
am going back to the Europeans in America When they forced the First Nations
into residential schools and forced them to become almost European and then
when they did become European they forced them to do slave labour or have no
jobs, barely a part of society and the Europeans (as seen in social class)
endorsed the residential schools as a happy place and a place where the First
Nations people went from being “Flea
bitten Savages” to a modern day gentleman or lady. Covering the whole thing up
so the higher class people thought it was okay. Another example of marginalization
is when the Americans went to Africa and kidnapped Africans to sell as slaves
and when they were freed from slavery, if they ever where they were forced into
the lower classes of society and forced to work for less money sit in the back
of the bus use different washrooms et cetera.
In this day and age and from all of the mistakes we have made in our
history we should know that no person or persons should be discriminated! But as
a race humans are still very young and not the best at preserving our planet
and resources and I do hope we will eventually find a way to explore planets
and find resources to help use prosper but not if it turns out like the movie
Avatar and we end up discriminating another species for the resources on there
planet. I feel that this movie has a great lesson to teach use about or past
and how to prevent anything like this in the future, it is a harsh reminder
that ethnocentrism, colonialism and marginalization is wrong and We should all understand that.
ReplyDeleteI suggest possible reorganizing your introduction like this:"The oppression of any peoples from any time or place is wrong and we should all know it! There is a very close relation between the movie Avatar and how our past was played out. The humans in this movie travel to the planet Pandora and try to mine all of the unobtainium from this planet’s core because they believe their race is more important and they need it more. In this essay I will be exploring the different aspects from the movie that relate to our past, such as ethnocentrism, colonialism, and marginalization." I think that it flows better and it makes more sense to have the thesis at the end of the introduction.
The rest of your essay should be looked at carefully. You have some really long and poorly structured sentences. Get rid of that semicolon and most of those commas. Try using periods instead. I would like to give you more feedback but the structure is making it very hard to read. Grammatically I cannot give you a whole lot more feedback because the grammar may change completely once the sentence structure is fixed.
Read it out loud and have someone else read it to you out loud.