Wednesday 19 September 2012

avatar draft

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                                               Avatar essay draft
                                                By   Randy Giles

Introduction

Don’t let the military control you or you can be the one being colonized. In this essay I will be covering the aspects of cultural contact, marginalization and the role of ethnocentrism in the movie avatar and our natives of 1900’s. Like when the navi where moved and had fought back to control the planet again from the humans. Almost like when our natives had fought Europeans to regain the control of their land. I intend to convince you that our military needs to stop trying to move natives and other cultures out of their land.

Body


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Cultural contact like when the navi had came in contact with the humans.


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Marginalization like when Jake had became an avatar.


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Ethnocentrism is when the humans think their religion is the best but the navi think theirs is better.



Conclusion

I hope I had convinced you that the navi and our natives should be left alone and not colonized and changed. If not changed then we can have more cultures and can have our native cultures can go on till time ends. You may ask yourself that why I would try to convince you but I am trying to show you what you as a society and a race that we need to stop our actions and think if they are actually necessary and if we absolutely need to do it. So take that into consideration next you root for native colonization.

2 comments:

  1. I like your conclusion although it should wrap up all the statements just not one. Good start!

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